Discribe the flower garden

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Discribe the flower garden

I am a boy who does not love flowers. but, I really like to behold the types of beautiful flowers. my house has a flower garden that has planted by my mother. The flower garden is in the left of my house.
my mother's flower garden has many types of flowers, such as orchids, apricot blossomes,... I do not know names of all flowers in the garden.
When my mother feels tired, she go to the flower gaden to watch it.
my mother takes care of her flower gaden. my mother waters every day. she really loves her flower garden.
I am a boy who does not love flowers. but, I really like to behold the types of beautiful flowers. my house has a flower garden that has planted by my mother. The flower garden is in the left of my house.
my mother's flower garden has many types of flowers, such as orchids, apricot blossomes,... I do not know names of all flowers in the garden.
When my mother feels tired, she go to the flower gaden to watch it.
my mother takes care of her flower gaden. my mother waters every day. she really loves her flower garden.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
I am a boy who does not love flowers. but, I really like to behold the types of b...
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Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
... behold the types of beautiful flowers. my house has a flower garden that has plan...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...wer garden is in the left of my house. my mothers flower garden has many types of...
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Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...wers, such as orchids, apricot blossomes,... I do not know names of all flowers in...
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Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'goes'.
Suggestion: goes
...arden. When my mother feels tired, she go to the flower gaden to watch it. my m...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: My
...e go to the flower gaden to watch it. my mother takes care of her flower gaden. ...
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Line 4, column 43, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
... mother takes care of her flower gaden. my mother waters every day. she really lov...
^^
Line 4, column 71, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: She
...ower gaden. my mother waters every day. she really loves her flower garden. I am...
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Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ay. she really loves her flower garden. I am a boy who does not love flowers. bu...
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Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
... I am a boy who does not love flowers. but, I really like to behold the types of b...
^^^
Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
... behold the types of beautiful flowers. my house has a flower garden that has plan...
^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...wer garden is in the left of my house. my mothers flower garden has many types of...
^^
Line 6, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...wers, such as orchids, apricot blossomes,... I do not know names of all flowers in...
^^
Line 7, column 33, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'goes'.
Suggestion: goes
...arden. When my mother feels tired, she go to the flower gaden to watch it. my m...
^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...e go to the flower gaden to watch it. my mother takes care of her flower gaden. ...
^^
Line 8, column 43, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
... mother takes care of her flower gaden. my mother waters every day. she really lov...
^^
Line 8, column 71, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...ower gaden. my mother waters every day. she really loves her flower garden.
^^^
Line 8, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ay. she really loves her flower garden.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16794833887 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 62.0 176.041082164 35% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.31 0.561755894193 55% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 266.4 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.5783958312 49.4020404114 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 42.8 106.682146367 40% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.0 20.7667163134 48% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.4 7.06120827912 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322365681493 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16955852051 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135127505733 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228334956558 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881000174889 0.056905535591 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.7 13.0946893788 28% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 50.2224549098 173% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 11.3001002004 33% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.06 12.4159519038 49% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.63 8.58950901804 66% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 78.4519038076 24% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 4.0 10.7795591182 37% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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