Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child’s success in school.
Although the children stay with the classmates all the time but I don’t believe they affect more to the child’s success than the parents.Personally,I disagree with the idea that the classmates is a more important influence than the parents on the child’s success.
On the one hand,the classmates can also affect to the children.As an example,they are in the same age so they can exchange about everything more easily.Moreover,the teenager usually like to use technology more than the parents.And all of them like to share and comment on the internet more than communicate in reality.In my opinion,that is a terrible difference between the parents and the children because the parents are usually old-fashioned and they are anti-technology so they often get angry when the children use technology so much lead to the serious problems between them.
Nevertheless,the parents totally can affect to the parents more than anyone because they know the children more than the others and they can know the best way to help the children when they need most by the experiences they have.To the children,they can know what their parents are afraid of and they definitely can humor them to show how mature they are and make them feel more safe.The parents always follow every activities of the children from when they was young to an adult and they can realize what is happening to their children and try their best to make the children avoid it.In brief,the parents affect to the child’s success and development more than classmates and everyone.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child’s success in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 56
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child’s success in school. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, in brief, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15748031496 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11363314946 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464566929134 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 84.0 20.2975951904 414% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 174.968568606 49.4020404114 354% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 436.666666667 106.682146367 409% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 84.6666666667 20.7667163134 408% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.0 7.06120827912 312% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253605473745 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.251276655304 0.084324248473 298% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.184314517061 0.0667982634062 276% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251276655304 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.184314517061 0.056905535591 324% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.2 13.0946893788 345% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -13.78 50.2224549098 -27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.0 11.3001002004 319% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.54 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 35.6 10.1190380762 352% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 36.0 10.7795591182 334% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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