Do you prefer to study at a university aboard or in your country? Explain your choice
I prefer studying at a university in my country, to studying at a university aboard. Needless to say, nothing is more wonderful than studying at a university in my country. A university which was built many years ago with training programme was ensured is my best choice. I choose a university in my country, Vietnam, due to the reasons following. Firstly, if I study at a university which nears my house, I am still live with my family. Although people who go aboard can communicate with their relatives easily through Internet, there are difficulties because of the difference of time. Also, I will be homesick if I don’t talk with my parents face to face. Secondly, the expensive living cost is the most worry as a foreigner. The stress of earn living and tuition will affect my studying negatively. Thirdly, the different cultural and languages are remarkable challenges for me. My Englis skill will be improved, however, I’m not really confident. Lastly, education of Vietnam are developing and soon it will keep up with aboard’s education. I believe in quality of Vietnam’s university. You will study at a university in your country, won’t you?
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| 2023-04-30 | lieu5198 | 56 | view |
| 2014-01-25 | sheetal makavana | 73 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, really, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98453608247 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95582040546 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628865979381 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.7610704171 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.0714285714 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8571428571 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24168549348 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911592459527 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135840546285 0.0667982634062 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24168549348 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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