Having had a classroom discussion about life improvement over the past 100 years, I agree with this idea to a great extent but I also believe that many aspects of life were better in the past.
Firstly, it goes without saying that medicine advances have lead us to the possibility of treating diseases that were considered as incurable and so we can enjoy today a higher life expectance than ever.
In addition, development of new technologies allows us to have almost endless entertainment choices. For instance, Netflix and YouTube are a truly revolution in this area. As a consequence, today we are able to watch our favourite TV show wherever and whenever we want.
However, there is a downside to this progress. Due to human activity, the quality and amount of natural resources has decreased and many species of plants and animals have disappeared.
To conclude, life has improved greatly in the last 100 years but we need to reach a balance between these advancements and the impact our activities have on Nature, so that we will have an even better world after another 100 years.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('truly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('revolution') instead of another adjective.
.... For instance, Netflix and YouTube are a truly revolution in this area. As a consequence, today w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 186.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9247311828 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75378002539 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672043010753 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1525929792 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150182310708 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049392011964 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574115153462 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765532579697 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562875940319 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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