In my opinion, life today is better than it was 100 years ago even if it worsened by one side.
It's better because scientific discoveries have improved the health system.
Indeed, many cures have been discovered for diseases that caused death, in the past.
Moreover, technological innovations have helped to prevent these diseases.
The technological advances have introduced new devices for entertainment, too.
These devices allow us to have different type of relationships with people, like WhatsApp, YouTube or Facebook.
We can connect from our device at any time.
Despite these positive aspects, there are also negative aspects.
One of them is climate change which has increased, and the situation is worrying.
For that reason, we must do something as soon as possible before it’s too late to intervene.
For example, we must use less plastic and prefer glass or use recyclable materials.
In conclusion, life is better today, but there are other problems than in the past
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: david93
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 158.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33544303797 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82134407236 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.746835443038 0.561755894193 133% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.2658042804 49.4020404114 33% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.25 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1666666667 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143981584431 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516245741768 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972523508713 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0516245741768 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972523508713 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.8 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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