experience in my life

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Personality
personality is diferent things at every one. Today ...
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Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... is diferent things at every one. Today i want talk with you about my personality...
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Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... want talk with you about my personality . after that i want you usually belive in...
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Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: After
...nt talk with you about my personality . after that i want you usually belive in yours...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...h you about my personality . after that i want you usually belive in yourself and...
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Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: I_A[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am' (first person of "to be")?
Suggestion: am
...d express confidently with all world. I an a internal person. before i feel i amno...
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Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'an' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: an; a
...d express confidently with all world. I an a internal person. before i feel i amnot ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...xpress confidently with all world. I an a internal person. before i feel i amnot ...
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Suggestion: Before
...with all world. I an a internal person. before i feel i amnot good like everyone, beca...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...l world. I an a internal person. before i feel i amnot good like everyone, becaus...
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Line 1, column 259, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...eel i amnot good like everyone, because i am so sight , lạck of confidence. i usu...
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Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ood like everyone, because i am so sight , lạck of confidence. i usually blame for...
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Line 1, column 295, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: I
...use i am so sight , lạck of confidence. i usually blame for my parents, because o...
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Line 1, column 353, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Until” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r my parents, because of their poverty. Until i step my university i reliaze that all...
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Line 1, column 359, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...arents, because of their poverty. Until i step my university i reliaze that all o...
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Line 1, column 421, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... reliaze that all of thing is own myself . it depend on my mind, my spirit and my ...
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Line 1, column 424, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...liaze that all of thing is own myself . it depend on my mind, my spirit and my per...
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Line 1, column 427, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'depends'?
Suggestion: depends
...ze that all of thing is own myself . it depend on my mind, my spirit and my personalit...
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Line 1, column 474, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...on my mind, my spirit and my personality .And at there , i decide change my life b...
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Line 1, column 476, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
... my mind, my spirit and my personality .And at there , i decide change my life by m...
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Line 1, column 488, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... spirit and my personality .And at there , i decide change my life by myself. ever...
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Line 1, column 491, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...irit and my personality .And at there , i decide change my life by myself. everda...
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Line 1, column 526, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Everday
...re , i decide change my life by myself. everday from getting up to going bed , i work h...
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Line 1, column 562, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lf. everday from getting up to going bed , i work hard and hope being good life in...
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Line 1, column 565, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... everday from getting up to going bed , i work hard and hope being good life in t...
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Line 1, column 617, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...and hope being good life in the future. and then when i comeback present life , i d...
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Line 1, column 654, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e. and then when i comeback present life , i dont see my success. i feel boring an...
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Line 1, column 659, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...d then when i comeback present life , i dont see my success. i feel boring and afrai...
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Line 1, column 680, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: I
...k present life , i dont see my success. i feel boring and afraid , i cant do anyt...
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Line 1, column 680, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...k present life , i dont see my success. i feel boring and afraid , i cant do anyt...
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Line 1, column 704, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...see my success. i feel boring and afraid , i cant do anything. all of thing are be...
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Line 1, column 707, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... my success. i feel boring and afraid , i cant do anything. all of thing are bein...
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Line 1, column 709, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...y success. i feel boring and afraid , i cant do anything. all of thing are being fai...
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Line 1, column 727, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: All
...boring and afraid , i cant do anything. all of thing are being failed. when everybo...
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Line 1, column 758, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: When
...nything. all of thing are being failed. when everybody also live good. perhap, it is...
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Message: “when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nything. all of thing are being failed. when everybody also live good. perhap, it is...
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Line 1, column 789, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Perhap
... failed. when everybody also live good. perhap, it is my duty , i cant change it. and ...
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Line 1, column 810, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...dy also live good. perhap, it is my duty , i cant change it. and then i keep on li...
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Line 1, column 813, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...also live good. perhap, it is my duty , i cant change it. and then i keep on like...
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Line 1, column 815, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...so live good. perhap, it is my duty , i cant change it. and then i keep on like that...
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Line 1, column 840, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...is my duty , i cant change it. and then i keep on like that until i reliaze i sti...
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Line 1, column 900, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...until i reliaze i still ok than others. and meditation slight in my mind. i have ch...
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Line 1, column 934, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...hers. and meditation slight in my mind. i have change my mind, change my life . i...
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Line 1, column 971, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...d. i have change my mind, change my life . i will receive my life with new energy ...
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Suggestion: I
...i have change my mind, change my life . i will receive my life with new energy . ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...i have change my mind, change my life . i will receive my life with new energy . ...
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Line 1, column 1012, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
.... i will receive my life with new energy . not negative thoughts , i still live wi...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Not
... will receive my life with new energy . not negative thoughts , i still live with a...
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Line 1, column 1036, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... with new energy . not negative thoughts , i still live with a normal life but not...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
...with a normal life but not requirement. with simplement , i feel i get better proble...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ife but not requirement. with simplement , i feel i get better problem, easily to ...
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Line 1, column 1110, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... but not requirement. with simplement , i feel i get better problem, easily to ma...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t requirement. with simplement , i feel i get better problem, easily to make solu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, i feel

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31797235023 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52418367262 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594470046083 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.5811868599 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 46.85 106.682146367 44% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.85 20.7667163134 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.9 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 53.0 5.01903807615 1056% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363053832543 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109612337972 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128835375011 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.363053832543 0.151304729494 240% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.3 13.0946893788 33% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 50.2224549098 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 11.3001002004 42% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.59 12.4159519038 53% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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