Good relationship between different countries would become more important than ever before.
At recently time, building a tight connection between other countries is difficult enough. However, it becomes essential for all countries to make a good communication with in. For example by doing a bilateral economic relationship, and helping each other while has a problem.
One of the solution way to make a good relationship with other country is doing a bilateral economic communication. For example, from import and export activities which country barter their own commodity with other commodity. As a result, it will make a new relationship with other country and create an additional income to development the country.
Another tips to make a good relationship is committing to help each other while has a problem in many sectoral areas. For instance, the relationship between Indonesia and Palestine. Nowadays, Indonesia had given by Lord to become a wealthy country which all the necessity had been provided. In opposite situation, Palestine had given a problem by God such a never ending big war. Then, Indonesia should help Palestine by offering the necessity things such as medicine and food. Also, Indonesia must lend Palestine money for completing their infrastructural.
In conclusion, make a good relationship between other country is main point and necessity things for the country which want to expand their wealthy. There are some tips to help country for doing it. Such as doing a bilateral relationship with other country and serving each other while has a problem.
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Sentence: At recently time, building a tight connection between other countries is difficult enough.
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Sentence: For example, from import and export activities which country barter their own commodity with other commodity.
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Suggestion: Refer to barter and their
Sentence: Another tips to make a good relationship is committing to help each other while has a problem in many sectoral areas.
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Sentence: Another tips to make a good relationship is committing to help each other while has a problem in many sectoral areas.
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