If you could choose one song that expresses who you are, what is it, and why
If I had to choose a song that best describes me, I would choose Zoronoa Zoro's rap song. The song is just right for me and also motivates me to try. The rap song conveys 2 contents.
Firstly, never give up on your dream, and ambition is highlighted through the rap. On the way to your dreams, ambitions will come one step closer to them and eventually come true. I always stick to my plan is my priority and I’m not to back down. For each listed task, I always plan and try my best to complete it; which helps me approach my final goal.
Secondly, the song shows the solidarity and love of the members of the pirate who can accept even the difficult parts of your teammates. My family and friendship, my opinion is the core value and fundamental things for anyone; who are always here, there to support and encourage me whenever going down that to be more successful. I always keep in mind that the harmonious family, the connection between members will always be an element that leads to success.
Difficulties, challenges, pressures are inevitable things in each person’s life. The best way is not to hide away them but confront and nail them. For me, when I am put under pressure in my life and work, listening to this song is also a way for me to relieve pressure and start with these plans to complete my goals.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2021-09-21 | Tran Thi My Linh | 56 | view |
| 2021-08-12 | jadejade | 11 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45679012346 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45397264532 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584362139918 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7625383555 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3076923077 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0898950350433 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367810262674 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492548926872 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610786078381 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538061438193 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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