Many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries. Why do some students study abroad? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
Our world is becoming more and more global for every sector which includes education also. Many students choose to attend foreign universities. As we discuss in this essay.
Some countries are more developed than the others, and this is because of those countries education system. United States, for instance, has a good education system. It is a wealthy country and since it is main language is English foreign students choose to have their education there. The students go to good quality universities and sometimes they stay on that country or they return to theirs. Tasting different cultures will widen your horizon, and it gives you different perspective to solve problems. This is a good thing. However, sometimes students who study abroad may suffer from racism. Sadly many countries citizens behave the foreign student this way which is unfortunate.
On the other hand, having friends from other countries is a good thing. It makes you understand that, there are several different opinions for all topics. It gives you to be respectful to other opinions which you might be strictly opposite. However, it sometimes may be challenging for the students who go abroad to study. Being away from your family, trying to adapt to a new culture, new friends. However, it makes you understand that you do not give enough importance to your beloved ones especially your family.
In addition, having education at wealthy countries also boosts your country if you return to your country and share the knowledge that you have experienced. Many people returns to their country after finishing their education abroad and become an academic teacher or a researcher.
In conclusion, students choose this because they want to taste new cultures, experience knowledge, and after returning to their country, becoming a researcher and help to improve their country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... choose to attend foreign universities. As we discuss in this essay. Some count...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...It makes you understand that, there are several different opinions for all topics. It gives you t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2474916388 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64986382289 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52508361204 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3465373318 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.45 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.95 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185561711625 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629606120164 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691171180257 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108924776318 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03192151173 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.67 Out of 6
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