Sending humans to mars is still in a distant future
Now a day, sending humans to Mars become a mission of the world and we can make that come true in the future. Astronomers are researching how do they get to Mars and developing robot system in there. Many spaceships consist of orbital ship, pace probe, rocket and rover... were sent to Mars by Soviet Union, USA, Japan and Europe to discover the surface, climate and geology of the red planet. The first spaceship landed successfully is Mars 2 of Soviet on November 27, 1971. But it lost signal just a few seconds after landed. After many times they fall, November 27, 2018, Insight spaceship was landed to the Mars. It is hoped that the mission will give scientists more information about Mars. Exploratory process of human was proposed that find a new home for human in the future. The plan to make Orion Ship to carry people to the moon in 2020, is a basic step in the process bring people to Mars. On September 28, 2007, NASA head Michael D.Grinffin said that NASA will aim to send people to Marsin 2037. Mars-500 is a project cooperation between Soviet, Europe and China, simulate bio-medical condition on Mars to research human adaptability in 500 days. In the end, sending humans to Mars is not too far away and need more time to prove it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 801, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or human in the future. The plan to make Orion Ship to carry people to the moon i...
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Line 1, column 947, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Grinffin
...September 28, 2007, NASA head Michael D.Grinffin said that NASA will aim to send people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56696428571 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39511736936 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620535714286 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2994143646 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.6923076923 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.69230769231 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228214701444 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736917446492 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761171626427 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228214701444 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.