In this society , it is not strange that some people really don’t know what they do is right or wrong . Maybe it’s right or maybe it’s wrong but who cares ? The important thing is that their negative actions will lead to disadvantage consequences.

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In this society , it is not strange that some people real...
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...range that some people really don't know what they do is right or wrong . Ma...
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...s;t know what they do is right or wrong . Maybe it's right or maybe it'...
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...disadvantage consequences. First of all , they urge us to do or to listen to what...
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...us to do or to listen to what they think . For example , a girl who wants to choos...
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... listen to what they think . For example , a girl who wants to choose her partner ...
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...eceive parents's agreement. Instead , they want to choose a guy whom They thi...
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...think is good for her future even though , they do not know much about him to be ...
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...though , they do not know much about him to be her husband . In this case whether...
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...t know much about him to be her husband . In this case whether the girl agrees , ...
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...d . In this case whether the girl agrees , the story about her life will be settle...
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...bout her life will be settled by destiny . On the other hand , if the girl tries...
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...her life will be settled by destiny . On the other hand , if the girl tries to f...
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...ife will be settled by destiny . On the other hand , if the girl tries to fight ...
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...settled by destiny . On the other hand , if the girl tries to fight for not marr...
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...tries to fight for not marrying that guy , the parents will have some plans making...
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...ve some plans making the girl to give up . The problem we concern about is that...
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...making the girl to give up . The problem we concern about is that they have con...
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... give up . The problem we concern about is that they have controlled the girl &...
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...e up . The problem we concern about is that they have controlled the girl &apos...
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...ey have controlled the girl 's life which is not good , as we can learn that...
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...the girl 's life which is not good , as we can learn that parents are the on...
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...t to give the best things for us because they think what they do is all right but...
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... it does not happen in everything at all .Moreover , they are totally stubborn gu...
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...it does not happen in everything at all .Moreover , they are totally stubborn guy...
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... does not happen in everything at all .Moreover , they are totally stubborn guys. Never...
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...t happen in everything at all .Moreover , they are totally stubborn guys. Never l...
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...ly stubborn guys. Never listen to anyone , never agree with anything but them . Th...
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...one , never agree with anything but them . The main reason that let them do these ...
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...se actions is not clear however I'm completely sure that they will keep doin...
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...hat they think it's useful for them . The question is , what can we do to sol...
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...bstacles , whenever opportunities appear , try to catch and implement . In brief ...
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...ties appear , try to catch and implement . In brief , that is everything I want t...
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... , that is everything I want to tell you , my sis . I don't want your future ...
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...s everything I want to tell you , my sis . I don't want your future is ruined...
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...ant your future is ruined by our parents . I don't want your life must depend...
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...our life must depend on one who you hate SO….. FIGHTING ! We have to prove with o...
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...ife must depend on one who you hate SO….. FIGHTING ! We have to prove with our pa...
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...can take the responsibility for our life , not someone else , NEVER !!!!
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...sibility for our life , not someone else , NEVER !!!!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, well, for example, in brief, first of all, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 62.0 24.0651302605 258% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51975683891 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40797828801 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51367781155 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7689231727 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4705882353 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 43.0 5.01903807615 857% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439571879521 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159394467453 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.186309281743 0.0667982634062 279% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.439605531177 0.151304729494 291% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.400084336023 0.056905535591 703% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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