An increasing trend is visible in the shift of people from rural to urban area. Some people opine that rural life is the best to settle down and latter group oppose it. In my perspective, urban life is much more advanced and has many benefits.
Firstly, natural environment contribute an effective life in rural area in which lack of pollution and echo friendly life glance in to both healthy and happy life. Atmospheric oxygen and humidity level are high in rural area in which suitable environment contribute an outmost enrichment in favour. Moreover, cost of living is less when it compares to city. On comparison less money is needed for daily living in which things and equipments are redilly available in area with cheap amount. For instance, cost of vegetables are less in rural areas that is devoid of poisons and chemicals.
On the other hand, people oppose this due to technological advancements and effective infrastructure in urban areas. Transportation systems and job facilities are good in urban areas due to allocation of funds by political groups. To show an example, urban areas are facilitated due to metro rail and professional colleges.
Inspite of many advantages in city life I prefer to live in urban area due to modern and structural development in the mentioned one. Accessibility and life style is better and it's downsides are negligeable compares to advantages. For example,recent research studies conducted in India showed that people from urban area are getting fast and good health facilities compared to rural area. I do agree with their view.
To recapitulate, it is clear that urban life provide better satisfaction for the people and it has a crucial significance in the development of a society with an extent of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07534246575 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92595653036 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530821917808 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6500315258 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.625 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184749361151 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620425219728 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457896919656 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101216371506 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429300783753 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.33 Out of 6
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