Robotics is one of the fastest growing industry in the modern era. Many companies and nations are heavily investing on this field realizing the potential future of this technology. Nowadays robots are used to carry out lot of functions there by replacing the human effort. Just like any other technology this one also has some advantages and disadvantages.
On one hand, it has lot of advantages. First and foremost, robots actually reducing the human efforts in doing difficult tasks or dangerous jobs. It is very helpful to restrict human casualties to a minimum in fields like mines and oil refineries. For instance Chinese coal mines are very famous for it's bad reputation in safety standards. Each year a staggering number of mine workers are losing their life because of this. In-order take they recently introduced robots in to the field, reducing the human labour by two third. As a result human causalities reduced considerably.
Secondly, robots are widely used in areas like weapon designing and aerospace technology where a great level of precision and accuracy is needed to carry out these tasks. Furthermore, militaries around the world using robots in the war front replacing the human soldiers. On top of that recent advancements like artificial intelligence (AI) made it possible to develop human alike robots capable of doing some complex functions like playing chess. Technologies like this laying the foundation for replacing the humans by all means.
On the other hand, no technology is perfect, there are some flows in robotics technology also. Like the internet, robots also vulnerable to internet attacks like hacking and virus attacks. So we can't give every duty to the robots and rest peacefully, anyone can take the control of these robots and instruct them to do tasks they aren't assigned off. In addition, AI makes robots think and act by themselves without any written programs, that some times pose threat to the humankind.
In conclusion, robotics technology has many pros and cons. But if the technology is used wisely, they can be a great asset to mankind. Also it is still an arguable topic that whether the human labour can be entirely replaced by these so called robots or not.
- The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- People should work a fixed number of hours per week, and employers should not ask anybody to work more than this. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion. 84
- The chart shows percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- the table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 80
- The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...reducing the human labour by two third. As a result human causalities reduced cons...
^^
Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he human soldiers. On top of that recent advancements like artificial intelligenc...
^^
Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...e are some flows in robotics technology also. Like the internet, robots also vulnera...
^^^^
Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...s like hacking and virus attacks. So we cant give every duty to the robots and rest ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 331, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...bots and instruct them to do tasks they arent assigned off. In addition, AI makes rob...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 136, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
..., they can be a great asset to mankind. Also it is still an arguable topic that whe...
^^^^
Line 9, column 175, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Also it is still an arguable topic that whether the human labour can be entirely...
^^
Line 9, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...laced by these so called robots or not.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08469945355 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67580652841 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568306010929 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8056291163 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5909090909 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.68181818182 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179664988915 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536411019664 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368627293743 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101248248133 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195132240017 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.