Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone, Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and example to support your choice
It is undeniable that traveling is becoming one of the interests of many people. Some of them prefer to travel with a companion rather than traveling alone because of several different reasons. In my viewpoint, I have a preference for traveling with a companion since I would like to enjoy memories of the trip with them.
To begin with, traveling with a companion helps us save a lot of money. The more people attend the trips, the more money we can save. The costs of trips are cheaper also allow us to buy many gifts when we come back. Saving traveling money is a good choice for me because I need to charge for many things in my life so if the trips have affordable prices, I also consider my decision if I should attend or not.
Furthermore, out of saving money, traveling with a companion also brings close feelings with them. They can share stories, experiences, and precious lessons in their lives and work; therefore, I may understand thoroughly and talk about that with them. Also, we can learn to treat well to others by having elegant gestures and appropriate attitudes. This plays an important role in communication with other people and even before the crowded. So traveling with a companion is a good selection to learn treatment from people around. In addition, the atmosphere of traveling with companions is so cozy and really lively.
To sum up, for the above-mentioned reasons, I am firm conviction that traveling with a companion will be a great opportunity for me to save money and enjoy trips with them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
... rather than traveling alone because of several different reasons. In my viewpoint, I have a pref...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, really, so, therefore, well, in addition, in my view, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74906367041 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73801471871 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554307116105 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8986968706 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5714285714 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298760597261 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120564749441 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863207379616 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192456429965 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932864435288 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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