Studying abroad
Studying abroad is always the desire but concern of parents. Many suppose children are got the best education they can afford in developed countries. However, others have opposite opinions. They want their children to receive domestic education instead of sending them thousands of miles away to another one. I am myself in favour of the first idea for the following reasons.
Currently, education scope and networks are increasingly expanded in Vietnam. Students are approached better technology and training system that cope with the needs of society. However, it is clear to find out the numbers of limitations when we compare developed countries 's educational foundation to ours. Studying abroad gives students the opportunities for improving their world views and enjoying learning conditions with technological advances. Furthermore, students have been shown that immersion is the best way to learn another language and culture. They are surrounded by English environment and become natural quickly. Especially, they can become universal citizens through cultural diversity.
In Vietnam, parents think that their kids are always small and weak. They devote too much unconditional love to their children that can led to dependence. Children thus could lack life skills and be hard to make decisions when they have independent life. In contrast, life abroad can give them lessons of confidence, maturity and skills that are needed in active world. They obviously have to able to look after themselves and sort out their own affairs.
In conclusion, not only can the children abroad lead an independent life but also get better learning conditions. It is useful and practical in their life. Its disadvantages should be solved before they leave home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, thus, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43956043956 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79065111289 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622710622711 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5490471705 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.25 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.65 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145215023192 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469007016429 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112170684546 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923279788966 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358220585362 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.68 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.67 Out of 6
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