There is a big number of people who wish to live in big cities. Write an essay to an educated reader to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in big cities. Include reasons and any relevant examples to support your answer.
In the fact that more and more people are becoming interested in living in big cities these days. However, there are both advantages and disadvantages of living there.
On the one hand, living in big cities brings a lot of chances to approach good jobs because the big cities have many companies, factories, and enterprises where they have a number of great and appropriate jobs for many people. Moreover, the vast majority of services are placed in the big cities so we could reach good services such as health care, bank, entertainment, shopping centers. Besides, most people would like to give their children learn in a good school; therefore, living in big cities is a good choice.
Out of the advantage of living in big cities, there is a few drawbacks when living there. Firstly, it is crowded. The land is not enough for people to live here because it is used to built many buildings, factories, roads, etc. A lot of people have to live in small houses or small apartment buildings. This is so inconvenient and uncomfortable. Secondly, in the big cities emitted too much smoke from cars, motorbikes or factories, it affects people's health because of the rising of air pollution. Dirt and flood in the rainy seasons is also a problem who live in big cities so annoyed.
In the conclusion, living in big cities has both pros and cons. If you would like to find jobs well and reach many great services, you should live in big cities whereas you have interested in the peaceful quiet atmosphere, living in the countryside is much better than in cities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75367647059 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62906208607 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518382352941 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2794551961 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3571428571 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373157825599 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142746912016 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823825933068 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25328633978 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217389582594 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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