Topic: Your favourite sport
What happens if you do not do exercise? You will become passive, ugly even or stupid. Thus, doing exercise is almost important in a part of your life but somebody feels that is bored. Therefore, I have advice for you, everyone should have a favorite sport to take up a new hobby. This makes you become a better version of yourself. Do the gym is a wonderful example for those who do not know how to start. When you start doing the gym, you should set up a goal. For instance, “how many kilograms do you want?” and “how long will reach your goal?”. If you love this sport, you should seriously act. Then, you can achieve your result as expected. There are many major pros and cons of fitness. First and foremost, it is related to your health, not only your physical health but also your mental health. It can help you release stress, having a positive vibe due to your beautiful shape. On the other hand, if you practice too much it will be not good for you. Your muscle will be sore or trauma. In conclusion, nothing good comes easily. You must be patient after that follow your every step to perfume it. And your life will turn over a new leaf.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36744186047 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14364620153 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637209302326 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8397530851 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.1666666667 106.682146367 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.9444444444 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154134977699 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543118471902 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537652543564 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154134977699 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 13.0946893788 39% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 50.2224549098 171% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 11.3001002004 35% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 12.4159519038 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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