we life better now than in past?
It is widely known there are many changes in our life. But, sometimes people ask if these changes are relevant enough to say that we live better nowadays than in the past.
First of all, the health system has great improvements owing to the new technological advances in medicine. For example, at present doctors have sophisticated equipment to detect and prevent diseases from probable deteriorations. For this reason, nowadays many illnesses have a cure with their respective treatment.
Secondly, the entertainment world has a significant evolution due to new technologies. Our way of communicating has changed. For instance, we have the chance of meeting with our friends or relatives through a webcam on a smartphone or PC. This advance is very useful because you can watch them and you can talk with them while they display on the screen.
Apart from the previous points, the Human Rights play an essential role in a democratic society. The legislators are fighting against the vulnerability of Fundamental rights. An obvious example it could be they create many laws which protect a group of people who is discriminated because of the sex, race, age or any other personal characteristic.
To sum up, not only the new technologies associated with medical investigation help us to have better health but also they make their way of communicating to be easier. While the Human Rights have international ambit and we can defense them. That is why I agree on we live better currently than in 100 years ago
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... personal characteristic. To sum up, not only the new technologies associated...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06374501992 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01786451486 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637450199203 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5324817419 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170611046869 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527730019271 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876816771874 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101438976181 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118614370027 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.67 Out of 6
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