what are the advantages and disadvantages of getting married with a foreigner

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what are the advantages and disadvantages of getting married with a foreigner?

To begin with, one evident benefit of cultural spousal is that it may help people live in great prosperity. Obtaining the passport of their partner's country and immigrating could open new doors for everyone to experience life with much more satisfaction and peace. This is highlighted when the destination would be a developed and wealthy country. Another reason that getting married to foreigners generally having a different culture would be advantages is making pairs' lives more exciting. In other words, such cultural exchanges enable couples to familiarize each other with their tradition and customs, which leads to joyful cohabitation.

On the other hand, some apparent drawbacks are for people who get married to another country's residents. Firstly, they are probably forced to live far away from their parents' home. As a result, they are likely to miss their families and relatives, leading to some emotional problems such as depression. Secondly, some challenges between couples and their children born in a cross-cultural family are sometimes inevitable. In this respect, the children may not be able to completely adapt themselves to one or even both parents' values and lifestyles. Should this situation keeps on in the long-term, it will negatively affect the families' bonding and relationships.

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Average: 7.8 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 630, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'families'' or 'family's'?
Suggestion: families'; family's
...ong-term, it will negatively affect the families bonding and relationships.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44117647059 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8913425241 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.6076652709 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.909090909 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135474108966 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453981718927 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694993076608 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106486277383 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656039059086 0.056905535591 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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