What you do in your free time

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What you do in your free time

Because I work in company, I have free time in the weekend and holiday. At that time, I usually stay at home to clean my house, go to the market or sing karaoke, play games. If not, I will go out with my friends. We usually eat something or watch the movies. We rarely travel somewhere near us. These travels are helpful for me. I always feel happy and smile very much.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 41.998997996 21% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 298.0 1615.20841683 18% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 72.0 315.596192385 23% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.13888888889 5.12529762239 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.91295063024 4.20363070211 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11676873478 2.80592935109 75% => OK
Unique words: 57.0 176.041082164 32% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.791666666667 0.561755894193 141% => OK
syllable_count: 98.1 506.74238477 19% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3019224923 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 42.5714285714 106.682146367 40% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.2857142857 20.7667163134 50% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 7.06120827912 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0844441386775 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319825374658 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595508031025 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844441386775 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.2 13.0946893788 24% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 50.2224549098 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 11.3001002004 42% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.25 12.4159519038 42% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 11.0 78.4519038076 14% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 4.0 10.7795591182 37% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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