Write an essay about the main problems teenagers have in your country. Describe them, and explain their causes and suggest possible solutions.
In modern society, technology is more and more developed, so teenagers have more chances to interact with technology early. This is a serious problem in my country, where teenagers become emotionless with everything happening around them. Teenagers only care about social media, such as how to show themselves to everyone or how to get over their friends in studying or fashion, etc,... Except for showing up by owning them, they don't care about anything, anyone or what is happening in the world. Therefore, undesirable sectors of society can readily lure kids into using drugs, drinking alcohol, or working illegally.
For instance, when teenagers surf the internet to update their personal information, the bad guys accidentally look for the data and they will approach to cheat the teenagers' property or kidnap them with many aims, such as forcing the parents of teenagers to give them money, buying them overseas or compelling them to do illegal things.
Thus, a question is asked in this case, " How to solve this problem rapidly and effectively?"
In my opinion, the government should organize healthy clubs, sporty clubs, entertaining clubs for teenagers to have more space to make friends, act, and communicate with each other. In addition, the parents of teenagers should also spend more time taking care of them and chatting with them to understand their minds. Because the main reason for this problem is that parents are too busy making money, to promote their occupations, they lack concern about the spirits of their children.
According to Time News, teenagers have an average age of eleven to twelve, which is growing psychologically, so there is a need to be concerned and followed by adults. This period is extremely important for forming their characters and development. During this period, if parents give more care, love, and understanding to their children, they will grow better and become people with good personalities. On the other hand, if teenagers lack parents' attention, care, they might have bad manners and participate in black organizations.
Finally, family and society should be more concerned about the teenagers who will be the pillars of the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 383, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...heir friends in studying or fashion, etc,... Except for showing up by owning them,...
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Line 1, column 431, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ept for showing up by owning them, they dont care about anything, anyone or what is ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teenagers'' or 'teenager's'?
Suggestion: teenagers'; teenager's
...ata and they will approach to cheat the teenagers property or kidnap them with many aims,...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, look, so, therefore, thus, as for, except for, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25988700565 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80100664522 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570621468927 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.4579790672 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208496413909 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759600665496 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404454938467 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106656358005 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476999190933 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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