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Write a letter to yourself of the year 2070

Dear Future Self,
I hope when you are reading this, you and your family are fine. You're not depressed, sad or anxious. I hope you had lived the best life, move to a good place with your family and love one. I don't know what will happen in the future, but I wish that you find peaceful after all the time you had been trying. You know, when I write this letter, we are freshman at a university, life'd been filled with fervour, joy and sometimes difficulty, but I swear I'm living the best life right now and I'm still trying to be better to success. Youth comes with enthusiasm, so that I wish when we get old, we find peace. Do you still hang out with friends you make in university? They helped us a lot. If you still have a least one of them, call him/her right now, tell him/her that you appreciate for staying in your life this long. I hope you still close with family, especially your younger sister, even though you fight a lot haha. You have to love her, there is no one out there like her, I hope she doing well and your bond is still strong. Last but not least, I don't want you to look back and regretting, every choice you made bring you experience and it become who you are.
Sincerely,
Me, Your Past Self

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: You're
...ing this, you and your family are fine. Youre not depressed, sad or anxious. I hope y...
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... place with your family and love one. I dont know what will happen in the future, bu...
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...y and sometimes difficulty, but I swear Im living the best life right now and Im s...
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...r Im living the best life right now and Im still trying to be better to success. Y...
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...They helped us a lot. If you still have a least one of them, call him/her right n...
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Line 2, column 990, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...s no one out there like her, I hope she doing well and your bond is still strong. Las...
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Suggestion: don't
... is still strong. Last but not least, I dont want you to look back and regretting, e...
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Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...ce you made bring you experience and it become who you are. Sincerely, Me, Your Past...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, thus, well, after all, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0695643077 2.80592935109 74% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617021276596 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5477603552 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9230769231 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0200266826453 0.244688304435 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00666684619827 0.084324248473 8% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230946326833 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0203817289516 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 50.2224549098 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 12.4159519038 55% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.34 8.58950901804 74% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 78.4519038076 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, thus, well, after all, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments