write a paragraph with at least 100 words about your closest friend

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write a paragraph with at least 100 words about your closest friend

I am lucky enough to have a lot of friends. Of all my friend, Huy is the best friend with me. I have played with Huy for over 6 years, Although we were not in the same class, but Huy and I often met each other on weekends, we told each other about our studies over the past week or going out together. Huy is a very sociable, friendly and he usually helps his friends. What I like about Huy the most is that you are very funny. I really like Huy and I will be friend forever.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, really, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 378.0 1615.20841683 23% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 98.0 315.596192385 31% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.85714285714 5.12529762239 75% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.14634628365 4.20363070211 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.98463485564 2.80592935109 71% => OK
Unique words: 68.0 176.041082164 39% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.69387755102 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 116.1 506.74238477 23% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.60771543086 75% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.039258744 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.0 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120257879877 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662113991084 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527732372455 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120257879877 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.9 13.0946893788 37% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 50.2224549098 177% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 11.3001002004 42% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.81 12.4159519038 39% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.72 8.58950901804 67% => OK
difficult_words: 8.0 78.4519038076 10% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 10.7795591182 46% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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