Write a persuasive essay about how video games are helpful or harmful to children

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Write a persuasive essay about how video games are helpful or harmful to children.

According to the CNN news, deadly crowd crush in Itaewon have been effect to many countries. People in other countries were anxious about whether they were going to take part in various holidays in the future. At the same time, governments from other countries have been tributes to the victims who attended the holiday. After the issues were happening, many events celebrated needed to be restricted, including the prime minister was vital to be guide citizens for escaping the horde. The beneficial for people were participating feast was that they should be reporting accurately the festival destination, these situations were able to assist the police department was rapidly deploying the officer to the scene for emergency phone call. Also, the communities ought to resign each other if the area was narrow, correspondence to the society can be avoid falling and stacking up bodies mistakes related to the Itaewon disaster. Therefore, holiday events must create a safety zone to resolve any worst troubles. To exemplify this, individuals who were suffering respiratory illness, safe zone was advantageous to build to increase the level of oxygen for humans who were feeling uncomfortable to breathe. Moreover, police officers should be stand in a safety zone to eliminate some street crime issues. In addition, emergency booth prioritized to construct. Staff or volunteers often necessary to contributed for the events to support the communities if there were occurring unconscious problems. In conclusion, governments should be under controlled and excluded in feast to produce safety precaution for society.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1242, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stood'?
Suggestion: stood
...he. Moreover, police officers should be stand in a safety zone to eliminate some stre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4422310757 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87568826935 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625498007968 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8368806881 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.833333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00825617164377 0.244688304435 3% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00336782882229 0.084324248473 4% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0111698245617 0.0667982634062 17% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00825617164377 0.151304729494 5% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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