Writing about advantages and disadvantages of mass media
In the blossoming age of media, beside the advantages, it has existed much disadvantages.
media connect people in all over the world. nowadays, there are more and more people to go other country to live or study, it seems to be a cheap means of communication. Specially, the life is more modern and change fastly, mass media facilitates to update information earlier.
By the way, the bad thing which it creates is not small. it makes people directly talk to each others less. mass media affect children seriously because it does not often share their life with parent instead of stranger friends in Social Network. The result is that parent cannot understand their son and daughter and parents and children are increasingly distant.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
..., beside the advantages, it has existed much disadvantages. media connect people...
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Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ges, it has existed much disadvantages. media connect people in all over the wor...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Media
... it has existed much disadvantages. media connect people in all over the world. n...
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Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nowadays
...a connect people in all over the world. nowadays, there are more and more people to go o...
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Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ad thing which it creates is not small. it makes people directly talk to each othe...
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Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Mass
...ople directly talk to each others less. mass media affect children seriously because...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 616.0 1615.20841683 38% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 123.0 315.596192385 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0081300813 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33024571262 4.20363070211 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66686495396 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 176.041082164 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.69918699187 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 188.1 506.74238477 37% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4780274233 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.375 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128124873281 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520754391838 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542581790727 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833176855859 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184819794397 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 78.4519038076 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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