The 18th century due to industrialization a lot of people migrate to developing countries. This affected lifestyle and increased major problems in developed countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, people’s migration to developed countries has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether the migration threatens the lifestyle of developed countries due to industrialization or not?”. It is a widely held view that immigration to developed areas is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that immigration to developed countries plays a vital role in the fast-changing world. To put into consideration, I express why I support this idea. First and foremost is that immigrants will be able to find a lucrative job and increase their earning capacity as well as promote the living standard. Secondly, since the developed countries encounter with the crisis of negative population growth, they can compensate their countries for professional workforce. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that immigrants would be the best source of economic growth, so developed countries will be able to increase their earning capacity. A very intangible example to illustrate would be western countries that suffer from lack of skilled worker.
However, there is no doubt that immigration to the developed countries provides people with various negative points. It should be taken into account that overcrowding is one of the most important problems that threaten the developed countries due to industrialization. Moreover, immigrants achieve the best job opportunities, therefore the host country will be deprived of a rewarding job or other facilities.
To recapitulate, I entirely agree that migration to the developed countries in order to promote industrialization must be taken into consideration. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ation to developed countries has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, in addition, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1207.87684729 140% => OK
No of words: 303.0 242.827586207 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56105610561 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34470823283 2.71678728327 123% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561056105611 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 379.143842365 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5925756231 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.615384615 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.25397266985 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171647842098 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651815815381 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550123106336 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11607635168 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414766907155 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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