Advances in science and technology and others areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Now in modern era, some people think that technology and science advances day by day. But other says areas of colonialism in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as extend the day of life. Nowadays, no good time to be alive than now. I will shed light on both views in upcoming paragraph and gives suitable example before proper conclusion.
On the one hand, some people think that technology helps us in many ways and increasing day by day which very useful for individuals. Also, the science is also helps to do many things which are tough but with help of science i can do it very easy. For example the person talk each other which is sit far away from them with the help of internet.
On the other hand, some people think that colonialism in the last 100 years have transformed because today every people want good life but they have don't so they only postponing the day which is bad form them because when we think we die one day then i don't lives life properly.
All in all every coin has two sides this essay is also contain two sides but i think that the technology and science is the good for society and person live life happily life because life is very small.
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- “Normal” societal roles for women include taking care of the children in the household. But now that women contribute equally in outdoor responsibilities, it would be a little unfair to expect the same amount of dedication towards the upbringing of th 77
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, for example, i think, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 1207.87684729 81% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.375 5.00649968141 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14523677395 2.71678728327 79% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 307.8 379.143842365 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.386221979 50.4703680194 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.888888889 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 7.25397266985 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332741578135 0.242375264174 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14290568446 0.0925447433944 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110836814635 0.071462118173 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196971629364 0.151781067708 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126024512789 0.0609392437508 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 53.1260098522 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 11.5310837438 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.32886699507 80% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 55.0591133005 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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