Air travel can only banefit the richest people in the world.ordinary people can get no advantage with the developement of air travel do you agree or disagree
I think this is banifit for ordinary people and also banefit for the richest people.Because the airline ticket is very expensive this ticket cannot affort poor peoples this ticket is only buy richest people.but the airline development is very helpful for the peoples because anywhere he can go they can go with airline airline saves the time of the peoples when people can go one to another country with the help of airline they go easily and save the time.in local cities people can go with the help of buses the buses go in 3or4 hours but the airline go in 1 hours they saves so much time of the people.but There are so many types of airlines some are business classes the business classes airlines are very expensive.but economy class airline is not expensive they buy the people easily.some people like to travel in the airline they like to travel with the help of airline we can save so much time.but the airlines are very expensive they can used only rich peoples. Some airlines rate has 60000or more than 200000 this airline only buy the richest people.but some airline tickets are not expensive they can buy ordinary peoples the name of airline is economy class.but I thik some people are very poor they cannot buy the airline tickets.I think air travel is very banifit for both peoples.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
I think this is banifit for ordinary people and also ban...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Because
...and also banefit for the richest people.Because the airline ticket is very expensive th...
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Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'buy the richest'.
Suggestion: buy the richest
...affort poor peoples this ticket is only buy richest people.but the airline development is v...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: airline
...use anywhere he can go they can go with airline airline saves the time of the peoples when peop...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'save'
Suggestion: save
...ours but the airline go in 1 hours they saves so much time of the people.but There ar...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
...he airlines are very expensive they can used only rich peoples. Some airlines rate h...
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Suggestion: I
...oor they cannot buy the airline tickets.I think air travel is very banifit for bo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 31.9359605911 63% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68421052632 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31060024659 2.71678728327 85% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 139.433497537 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.390350877193 0.580463131201 67% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.931034482759 644% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 12.6551724138 16% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 114.0 20.5024630542 556% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 323.5 50.4703680194 641% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 534.0 104.977214359 509% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 114.0 20.9669160288 544% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.25397266985 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222705581514 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187031790227 0.0925447433944 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0260549418081 0.071462118173 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222705581514 0.151781067708 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 57.6 12.6369458128 456% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -44.23 53.1260098522 -83% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.54236453202 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 47.8 10.9458128079 437% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.05 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.3 8.32886699507 136% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 55.0591133005 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.94827586207 543% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 47.6 10.3980295567 458% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 48.0 10.5123152709 457% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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