Any new technological development in recent times is a boon or curse for society in general. Do
you agree or disagree that mass media like TV, radio and newspapers have a huge impact on
people, especially the young generation.
It is argued that mass media like television, radio and newspaper can have a major negative influence on people’s lives especially the younger generation. This essay agrees with this statement and believes that although there are many other factors that influence people, media definitely has a huge impact. The essay will first discuss the potential negative impact that mass media devices have had on society along with supporting arguments, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, there are numerous reasons why mass media can impact the minds of the youth . But the most notable one stems from the fact that people and the younger generation spend a large amount of time exposed to various forms of media. As an example, a person can start off his day by reading the newspaper, then listen to the radio and finally end the day by watching the television. Moreover, as we are influenced by our environment this will have a telling impact on a person’s behavior.
Some may offer a contrary argument, and say that media is only a source of entertainment. However, it also needs to be taken into consideration that prolonged exposure to negative ideas expressed in media subconsciously makes its way into our minds and lives. The most concerning aspect about this fact is that children get much of their beliefs and values through different forms of media they are exposed too. This idea is completely unacceptable, as there also needs to be conscious choice by parents on what sources of information their children consume.
Taking into account the arguments discussed, we can conclude that although mass media can be seen as a form of entertainment the negative ideas expressed through it has a considerable effect on people, especially the youth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... media can impact the minds of the youth . But the most notable one stems from the...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'offers'.
Suggestion: offers
...n a person's behavior. Some may offer a contrary argument, and say that media...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09246575342 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82942769878 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571917808219 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0341103625 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.916666667 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176220233411 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672332162258 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592806129923 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108050917551 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786530940255 0.0609392437508 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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