The belching and unauthorized behavior modern offices.how for do you support give your response with justification.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is colossal upsurge in unauthorized behavior .There is a wide spread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. However I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one in that unauthorized behavior modern offices can not only contribute to modern offices. but also lead to numerous other benefits in various field. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can benefits more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease efficacy and convenience needless to say all these merits stand one is good stead ,as for argument their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the afore mentioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one think and excel in varied areas .Besides, only when one follows such a systems can they broaden their horizons. Thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility dedication as a perseverance .Furthermore, bad manners, harassment, abusive language, aggressive and many more are some of the problems.
In view of the argument outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of good behavior are indeed to great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02597402597 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85886082418 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597402597403 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.9115701121 50.4703680194 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.33497536946 337% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10766167355 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461754368213 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629510922108 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0576520873594 0.151781067708 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351302783638 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.