Business whether big or small is to maximize profit. Do you agree with that? Give your opinion.
It is often argued that maximizing profit is the main objective of every business whether it is a large or a small enterprise. A vast majority of people opine that businesses have the ultimate goal to attain a maximum profit. However, others refute to this supposition and think that it has adverse ramifications. In may opinion, I firmly believe that indeed all businesses have only one thing in mind - to make their income reach its full potential. This essay will elucidate the pertinent points of view to substantiate my assertion before drawing a reasoned conclusion.
Undoubtedly, a business is considered a source of livelihood. In other words, whether it is a huge or a tiny business, its primary purpose is to generate a substantial amount of income for its owner. To cite a prime example, a recent study shows 90 percent of the tourism business in the UK is family owned. Thus, it is quite evident that a businesses has an ultimately have a goal to increase its profit because it is the owner's source of living.
Furthermore, these enterprises have a vision to expand. As matter of fact, all businesses wants to dominate and create more branches to significantly increase the money they generate. For instance, a survey showed that in 2019, Adidas created 7 branches in Oregon, hence its profit also increase sevenfold.
In conclusion, considering what has been discussed above. Maximizing profit is indeed the ultimate goal of every business.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04115226337 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93251093736 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600823045267 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8582175739 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175848471105 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592602525177 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646405833391 0.071462118173 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10050076321 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468083063091 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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