Can the law change human behavior?
In recent years, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trend to see prodigies discussing about whether law can change a human behaviour across the world., be it an affluent or impoverished nation. In this essay, I would further elaborate the reasons why the law cannot influence men and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of reasons law cannot easily change a character of a men, however, it can influence him and make some forceful changes in their behavior. For instance, there are many rules and regulations we are knowingly or unknowingly following such as traffic rule. Whenever, we see a green light we automatically start driving, but if it is are signal we stop the vehicle. So, the rules can change the people to some extend.
On the other side, there are many example as the people are still not changing their behavior even punishable laws and rules are made by the government. For instance, there are many punishable laws are introduced by the government bodies against sexual harassment and community violence. though the rules are made, people are e criminals are not concerning the laws, because of their influence in the higher authorities, moreover, many are there to protect them.
In conclusion, even the laws are made for the people to live in peaceful country, still people are suffering in the world. In my opinion, people should obey the laws,the laws can influence the people and can change their activity, which cannot change their behaviour.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96456692913 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66595906095 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547244094488 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2618209466 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.636363636 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364027849536 0.242375264174 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135355359388 0.0925447433944 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119783685859 0.071462118173 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214096787893 0.151781067708 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425278210825 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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