In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this Phenomenon?

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In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this Phenomenon?

The importance of credit cards which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people clamming that if is beneficial, which others reject this notion. The substantial influence of cashless society has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational, and this essay will elaborate my reasons. For favoring the positive and negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to be a logical conclusion.

There are ample of fruitful reasons which will further explain this argument, but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that nowadays each and every busy in their life. Therefore, with the help of using plastic cards people can save their time. Moreover, in the modern world, most of people have educated as compared to last decade, thus it is good option for use new technique as well as it is need of 21st century.

However, there are some pitfalls that negative this argument and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of using credit cards, but one of the most alarming one is that large number of citizens cannot use credit cards because they are illiterate than young generations. As an illustration, according to latest search, merely 30% older aged people use credit cards in India. As a result, they can lose your saving money if they use credit card.

According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of credits cards are instrumental indeed, however it is potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, as a result, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0977443609 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65104508164 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593984962406 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4465476596 50.4703680194 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.272727273 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239062271701 0.242375264174 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879134126036 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420465530958 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127319122681 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645695839611 0.0609392437508 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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