Nowadays, the community is using more cards than money to pay finantial responsibilities, or buy items on internet. However, it seems like the advantages of the pay by cards methods are not as safe as cash is. I would like to develope this topic to see what are the pro and cons of this issue.
credit cards have been made to make easier the consumers life, and, give them easier access to buy items or pay bills whit money that they do not have in the bank accounts, furthermore, cards could be used to make payments on line which it is impossible to do by cash. Avobe these the credit cards have advantages over the cash, but unfortunately this method of payment is not 100% perfect.
On the other hand, cash is not as useful to do pays and buy on internet, but it is true, cash is safer pay method, because credit cards content plenty information from bank accounts and they give free access to sellers to get money from their buyers.
For instance, one case of hacking was on news last Saturday, the TV program said that hacker stole $10000 dollars from differents card users in only one night.
For all of these, I conclude that credit cards have great advantages, and also big disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 1207.87684729 84% => OK
No of words: 217.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64976958525 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48148873048 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599078341014 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 379.143842365 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.8730432499 50.4703680194 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.125 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.125 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.25397266985 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131331321005 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686169808532 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451447208015 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696325244038 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540012468853 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 53.1260098522 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.5310837438 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 55.0591133005 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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