Children in many countries are eating more fast food and convenience snacks. Why are children doing this and how serious are the consequences?
Thed problem of children in many countries are eating more fast food and convenience snacks which was debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is hazardous while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has speaked the controversy over the potential impect in recent years. In my opinion, former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate the negetive effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that many children always like fast food this is not good thinking, which is main effect of skin problums and many other kind of feel the problums eat the young food.Hence, it is apparent why many are against this trend.
Steps to deal with this problems are many but the most significant ones are not complicated but accessible and practical. Firstly, fast food shops are being opened every at any corner of the street and these shops.
To conclusion, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the problem of increasing skin problums in day by day can be successfully addressed provided that the above stated measures are taken.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, thus, while, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11111111111 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68037564163 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.07099409 50.4703680194 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304795161726 0.242375264174 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112705510707 0.0925447433944 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116717249508 0.071462118173 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161742546522 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115379826255 0.0609392437508 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.1260098522 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.9458128079 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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