since 1970, the rights of animals has been the topic of more debates. Although the zoos regarded as thoroughly positive and constructive helper to animals' right among the public around the world, many people claim that they hurt animals. For the purpose of this essay, I will analyze why I agree with zoo ban.
To begin with, there are various reasons to dismiss zoo as an advantage to animals life. At first, zoos can help to protect and treat the injured animals, but the essential aim of the zoo is to business. the owner of these places designed them to exhibit animals due to their profitability. For example, they collect diverse animals of different species such as Kangaroo and Giraffe to increase their money.
In addition, the zoo owners know the interest of people in unknown animals. They buy rare animals and have the negative effect on animals extinction and opposed by many people and NGOs. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MTR University researchers in 2016 has shown that a significant number of endangered animals in different points of the world are hunting to sell to zoos for the exhibition.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that the drawbacks of the zoo are far its benefits and damages the rights of animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94618834081 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62323789689 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605381165919 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.0215160573 50.4703680194 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.3 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.25397266985 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292859733983 0.242375264174 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114692071548 0.0925447433944 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471525428195 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170352993972 0.151781067708 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751960179337 0.0609392437508 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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