In this days, the average of life's hope is enhancing for women and men because of medical care developments. Although most people believe this is a beneficial development, there are disadvantages of an old people for individuals and societies. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss some of damaging the costs of old population.
To begin with, there are various reasons to refuse disadvantages of the aging population to the society and economy. At first, Although the advances in medical care increase the average of life expectancy, aging brings with it weakness and pains. For example, an old person is involved with the variety of diseases such as optic problems, otolaryngology diseases, and physical weakness.
In addition, while many of people like living for a long time, this long life increases the government costs. They need to insurance to pay the cost of treatment, the retirees that involved with aging diseases. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by the MUV University researchers shows that a significant number of government's expenditures goes to pay the retirees insurance.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about positive consequences of increasing the average of life expectancy, there are many damages from an aging population for governments and societies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 209.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3971291866 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07375958484 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574162679426 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9818009555 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.8 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 7.25397266985 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378516342206 0.242375264174 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145160976389 0.0925447433944 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858425666066 0.071462118173 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22236261424 0.151781067708 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799149295743 0.0609392437508 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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