Combat sports such as boxing are popular Some people believe that combat sports encourage violence while other believe they promote self restraint and discipline

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Combat sports such as boxing are popular. Some people believe that combat sports encourage violence while other believe they promote self-restraint and discipline.

Nowadays combat sports like boxing, judo have become popular hobbies. While some people feel such sports are a source of violence others believe they instil self-restraint and discipline. This essay will discuss the positive elements of combat sports.
Combat sports helps in self-protection in times of need. With the increase in anti-social elements in the society, it becomes important to equip oneself to fight and techniques of combat sports definitely can help. For example, lot of schools have started training courses on judo, karate so that students can develop the skill to protect themselves from the ills. To sum up, combat sports helps to build the skills to save oneself in times of danger.
Combat sports helps in inculcating an element of discipline in one’s life. One need to go through a thorough regime to hone the skills of such sports. For example, personally I have taken training in karate in my school days and the regular classes has helped me in becoming a more disciplined person that I am today. Definitely such sports help to make one disciplined.
This essay discussed the positive elements of combat sports which helps in building self-protection capabilities and becoming a more disciplined person. In my opinion, combat sports positively influence the human mankind.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...positively influence the human mankind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for example, in my opinion, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 10.5418719212 9% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1100.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 210.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2380952381 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82134719593 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585714285714 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9931441807 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6153846154 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356795367814 0.242375264174 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147086742783 0.0925447433944 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138813281589 0.071462118173 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250119533325 0.151781067708 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166129064326 0.0609392437508 273% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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