Company top-level authorities should or should not take employees suggestions or ideas to take any decisions. Discuss.
In recent times, the companies are drastically growing and recruits lot of talented workers for business improvement. Companies have few top-level authorities and the back bone of each company is their employees. In my opinion, the top-level authorities should take employees suggestions before taking any decisions.
Firstly, since the employees are the real persons facing day to day problems in the company and all the management decisions will directly or indirectly affect the low level workers; hence, the suggestions from the workers will have more value than the management decisions,therefore the top-level authorities will get more ideas from the workers before taking any decisions.
Secondly, each empolyees works in different streams and senior authorities are not aware of what is really happening inside each stream. Moreover, the employees will feel more satisfied and proud, if they are allowed to speak out; this will gives a positive vibes in their minds, hence, overall performance of the company will be increased by having satisfied employees.
In a nutshell, the employees plays a vital role in the company and their suggestions or ideas are valuable than anything else. So, in my opinion, the top-level authorities should take suggestions or ideas from employees before taking any decisions to improve the company's profit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , therefore
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...hey are allowed to speak out; this will gives a positive vibes in their minds, hence,...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'vibe'?
Suggestion: vibe
...o speak out; this will gives a positive vibes in their minds, hence, overall performa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 208.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51923076923 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93821988535 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 139.433497537 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528846153846 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.9 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.3261003328 50.4703680194 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.5 104.977214359 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.9669160288 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.375 7.25397266985 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.491420896853 0.242375264174 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.245439777838 0.0925447433944 265% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.234546386119 0.071462118173 328% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.334162453711 0.151781067708 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.194813217438 0.0609392437508 320% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 12.6369458128 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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