In this day and age, the negative effects of computer technology have had more than its positive impacts on the society. Although the computer has brought many advantages to human's life, any human invention has disadvantages beside its goodnesses as well. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss why I agree with this statement.
To begin with, there are various reasons to accept that the negative of computer technologies are more than their positive impacts on society. Firstly, Although after the advent of the computer the speed of working and calculating has become faster, the theft of information has become faster too. In the digital world, the thieves can access confidential information quickly. For example, in banking systems, the information of a customer can be transferred in a flash memory just in a few seconds.
In addition, while the accuracy of calculation has become further by digital systems, the information protection is a serious issue in these systems. The hackers can reach to systems of many organizations via internet. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2016 shows that there are a significant number attacks by hackers to important systems like airport systems annually.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about the impacts of computer technologies, my personal sentiment is that despite all of the benefits from the computer, we can not ignore its negatives that are many important and destroyer.
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first, firstly, if, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32083333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93257269968 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5875 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1662948085 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.090909091 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286020508641 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111450635313 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165226732145 0.0667982634062 247% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163387696713 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145575584836 0.056905535591 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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