Recently, the phenomenon of retiring workers sooner than the deadline, and its corresponding impacts sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that soon retirement cannot be highly beneficial, such an issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that this act can be plus for job opportunities and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support retiring aged workers before the legal time of retirement. At first, retiring workers can bring many budget problems for the governments and organization. However, there are very advantages to send old workers to rest. For example, by soon retirements, governments can make job positions free for young people.
In addition, the companies will lose the experiences of workers that have worked many years in the company, if retire them soon. But, the companies can use the new knowledge by retreating the young educated people. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2018 has shown that a significant number of reputed companies such as Google and Microsoft retreat the young graduated people because of their familiarity to new sciences.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that the benefits of retiring workers before deadline far outweighed its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48214285714 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02338620725 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629464285714 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2120349278 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.636363636 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40680768916 0.242375264174 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139743461529 0.0925447433944 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091255029346 0.071462118173 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216734375845 0.151781067708 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111395137892 0.0609392437508 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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