In this day and age, the negative effects of computer technology have had more than its positive impacts on the society. Although the computer has brought many advantages to human's life, any human invention has disadvantages beside its goodnesses as well. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss why I agree with this statement.
To begin with, there are various reasons to accept that the negative of computer technologies are more than their positive impacts on society. Firstly, Although after the advent of the computer the speed of working and calculating has become faster, the theft of information has become faster too. In the digital world, the thieves can access confidential information quickly. For example, in banking systems, the information of a customer can be transferred in a flash memory just in a few seconds.
In addition, while the accuracy of calculation has become further by digital systems, the information protection is a serious issue in these systems. The hackers can reach to systems of many organizations via the internet. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2016 shows that there are a significant number attacks by hackers to important systems like airport systems annually.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about the impacts of computer technologies, my personal sentiment is that despite all of the benefits from the computer, we can not ignore its negatives that are many important and destroyer.
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first, firstly, if, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 241.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3112033195 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93020102781 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585062240664 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7003444847 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.363636364 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286020508641 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111450635313 0.0925447433944 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165226732145 0.071462118173 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163387696713 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145575584836 0.0609392437508 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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