Cultural shock is a new worrying concern for few immigrants what are the few possible options to eradicate?
In the recent era we see many of new youngsters and professional are migrating to another countries the underlying reasons can be better education or it will be career prospectus, The cultural shock to the new errant's is the next alarming issue in this essay I will go through different solutions to eradicate this.
Firstly, the cultural shock will be change in the food the immigrant takes and the availability at newer place, followed by the language barrier where local people may not be aware of the language, then the cultural differences at the local region will make them feel discomfort, lastly the homesickness adds up to feel this kind of deprivation.
To eradicate the cultural shock there are many options where in the individual can join the social clubs available locally these will help him to get engaged with local people and get understanding on the cultures, Moreover indulging in the local sports is one of the best possible solution where in an Individual will get a chance to make friendship and keep himself out of boredom, Then other elucidation is to visit local restaurants and get a hang of local cuisines this helps him to get adapted with local food. Finally staying with local people in the available hostels or paying guest accommodation will make him feel better.
Those are some possible solutions to avoid the cultural shock for new immigrants who are visiting new places or completely a different region.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9670781893 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74000533887 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.5024630542 234% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 146.461462508 50.4703680194 290% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 241.4 104.977214359 230% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.6 20.9669160288 232% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.8 7.25397266985 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155509842321 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103642885218 0.0925447433944 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893493965274 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127215457165 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833215159367 0.0609392437508 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.3 12.6369458128 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.76 53.1260098522 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 10.9458128079 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.94827586207 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.3980295567 204% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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