Dangerous activities like extreme skiing, bungee jumping etc. and whether you support them or not.
Extreme sports such as parachuting, bungee-jumping and scuba-diving have burdened to become popular activities today. Some people think that they are good sports for a stronger personality, while others argue they are very dangerous and harmful. I am inclined to believe that these sports are in fact dangerous and they should not be promoted. The following paragraphs will analyze their inevitable dangers and suggest other better sports for people to participate.
First of all, extreme sports are dangerous and risky. These forms of sports generate high levels of risks and there are always chances of unfortunate events that will happen. For example, there have been a number of youngsters who died from participating in scuba-diving in Texas. Specifically, a research study conducted by Yale University in 2014 has found nearly 4000 cases of injuries from extreme sports in the USA alone.Second of all, there are a variety of other forms of sports that are just as exhilarating and interesting as extreme sports for people to play. They not only are safer but also bring to players a feeling of relaxation and entertainment. As an example, sports such as tennis, football and horse-racing are tremendously fun to play and also safe
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that extreme sports are indeed dangerous and there are many other safer types of sports that people should participate in instead. It is expected that people take cognizance of this fact and further, the governments must establish guidelines to educate people about the aforementioned
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30158730159 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9598173968 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559523809524 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.006446004 50.4703680194 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.454545455 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0993307940279 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472192205704 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054481711427 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073532695917 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351702107903 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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