Dangerous activities like extreme skiing, bungee jumping etc. and whether you support them or not.
It is irrefutable to say that, popularity of extreme sports has continued to grow over the last decade. People would like to do some dangerous sports like scuba diving, bungee jumping, bull fighting etc. in many countries. I am inclined to believe that these sports are in fact dangerous and they should not be promoted. This essay will elucidate some advantages and disadvantages of adventure sports before giving appropriate conclusion.
The benefits that are associated with the risk-taking sports are numerous. To commence with, it helps cultivate self-confidence and independence of a person. It is important to note that by successfully face to the challenges of adventure sports such as rock-climbing, young people overcome their fears. Furthermore, there is a lot of fame and money involved in these sports. Performers get attention by doing stunts on motorcycles and jumping from tall buildings. Therefore, the discussion shows that playing such sports may give the symbol of manpower, brings confidence and prestige in society.
As every coin has two sides, dangerous sports are also associated with a few disadvantages. Bring a sportsmen is very risky and dangerous. First and foremost, if a rope breaks while bungee jumping, a participant can be seriously injured or even die. Also, equipment needed for these sports are very expensive, hence, many people cannot purchase them, which increases the chance of tragedy. To exemplify that who gravitates towards these types of sports could not concentrate on their studies, due to which, they were not able to complete their studies and cannot get lucrative jobs.
I see that there are potential evidences to support the arguments I have provided and hence, my opinion is that adventure sports have many impressive benefits including problem-solving and team work skills. However, it is recommended that these sports should be operated under proper guidance and supervision.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 72 out of 90
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 251 350
No. of Characters: 1337 1500
No. of Different Words: 161 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.98 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.327 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.955 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 104 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 71 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.929 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.021 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.346 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.554 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.049 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
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More content is added to essay on 31st aug. Please provide updated new score out of 90 and rate out of 100.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'will' and 'yield'.
Suggestion: will never yield
Although topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement, a constructive ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, in fact, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51063829787 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13427871017 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646808510638 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4759948154 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.916666667 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.063090113147 0.242375264174 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0209131684392 0.0925447433944 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230675754744 0.071462118173 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0376625791894 0.151781067708 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278806360026 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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