Do you support dangerous activities like extreme skiing? What are the reasons for that?

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, hence, however, if, likewise, nevertheless, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1207.87684729 160% => OK
No of words: 323.0 242.827586207 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.97832817337 5.00649968141 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29599681031 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 139.433497537 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687306501548 0.580463131201 118% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 379.143842365 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6008721968 50.4703680194 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.733333333 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.25397266985 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.12807881773 606% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.33497536946 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153055213 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396317147611 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055248884393 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0337469500563 0.151781067708 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503427368906 0.0609392437508 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.4 11.5310837438 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.32886699507 129% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 55.0591133005 225% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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