Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products or is it the responsibility of producers to not over-package in the first place?
Choose which side you must agree with and discuss why you chose that position.
Over-packaging of several products is one of the changing trends in this modern era.While some people argue that consumers should avoid over packaged products, others think that producers should abstain from over-packaging products from the outset.This essay will discuss why consumers should avoid using this type of products.
There do exist reasons why the consumers should desist buying over-packaged products. Over-packaging of products incur extra costs, and at last it is only the customers who bears the over packaging cost. Stationary items,for instance, do not require extra packaging but still sometimes you will find it with extra wrapping. Thus, by avoiding extra packaging products consumers can save their money by no spending on these products.
Over packaging is a way which producers apply to attract the buyer to increase their sales. By not buying these products consumers can send the message directly to the producers that over wrapping is not a mean to increase sales. Producers always watch out the sale's reports of their products and by observing the decline in the sales of the packaged products, they will stop over wrapping the products. Therefore, not buying the over packaged products will stop the producers from over packaging of products.
This essay discussed how refraining over packaged products can save the extra expenses of consumers as well as it send message to producers that over packaging is no more in demand among customers. In my opinion, abstaining over packaged products by consumers is much more important and it should be done only where it is necessary and for the benefit of a customer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27756653992 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73949029324 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475285171103 0.580463131201 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.39886985 50.4703680194 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.181818182 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434606785668 0.242375264174 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19616849294 0.0925447433944 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649731394458 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291748885019 0.151781067708 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384049330277 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.