Our global diaspora is broadly segregated into two half, occidental and oriental. So there are bound to be differences on social, economical and cultural front as well therefore, the issue of place where a person grew up has influence on there accomplishment is no exception. And irrefutable its has it advantages and disadvantages.
This essay is going to discussed the advantages and disadvantages with pertinent argument and examples and come to a conclusion. To begin living in the countryside has little to offer to a growing child. For example, education, electricity, library, good roads and water. For a child to accomplish success in life he must first be educated, because education is the key ingredient for success. How can a child study to be successful when there are no school, libraries and electricity?
Another, pivotal aspect of my stance is that many people believed that countryside living offers children good morals, manner, discipline and obedient to parent. However, what is obedient without success in life? Children in the big city are able to quickly accomplish education, become managers and director in so many organization as a result of availability of resources open to them in their place of living, to help better there lives and that of their families.
To conclude, although, the place where a place grew is highly beneficial but we should be prudent to strike a balance, logical and rational towards the same for the optimal and fruitful outcomes of efforts of resources.
- A rise in the standard of living in a country seems to only benefits cities rather than rural areas. What problems might this difference cause? How might the problems be reduced? 78
- Most centuries important part of education have remained such as reading ,writing and Math with the advent of computer .some people think that computers can be made as fourth skill to be added to the list. What extent agree ot disagreee 73
- Nowadays many people work part or full time from home. Some people say that working from home has many benefits while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
- Some people think that the government should pay one of the parents of very young children tostay at home to look after their children.What do you think would be the advantages and disadvantages of this policy? 56
- It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. Some people believe that the year off is a waste of time while others believe that it is necessary.Choose which position you most agree with and discu 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 25, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'discuss'
Suggestion: discuss
...disadvantages. This essay is going to discussed the advantages and disadvantages with p...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun organization seems to be countable; consider using: 'many organizations'.
Suggestion: many organizations
...ion, become managers and director in so many organization as a result of availability of resource...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15040650407 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00885785527 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617886178862 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1043499997 50.4703680194 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.583333333 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155355345317 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04306845259 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639583653347 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925730331113 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051833125269 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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