Recently, there have been fast developments in new technologies in recent years that have become a controversial debate among public around the world. Although some of these developments regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive some others have been harmful to the society. For the purpose of this essay, I will analyze some of its advantages.
To begin with, there various reasons to express that these rapid extensions are more booner than damaging.
At first, the last advantages in different fields such as computer and medicine have been very influential in people's live. the computer can be harmful due to incorrect using it, but it is very profitable. For example, after the appearing of the computer, it affected the rate of developments in transformation systems.
In addition, medicine expansion helped to people live healthier than before. The people have become more aware of the factors of diseases by new information. the identification of diseases has become more accurate than before. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by Tehran University researchers has shown that a significant number of illnesses can be fully cured by the new medical equipment such as MRI and radiology.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that the recent advancements in new technologies delivered many benefits to the society that are outweighed its drawbacks.
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but, first, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46875 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07547166928 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602678571429 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9390600855 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.083333333 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132941591929 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439391934797 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045493873314 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0699911254323 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375113295044 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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