Do you think that the rapid development of new technologies in recent years is a boon or curse for societies around the world? What is your opinion on this and support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
In this days, there is a question that either the fast developed of recent technologies in past years is the benefit or negative for societies around the world. I think this rapid expansion of new technologies has been positive the effect on people life. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss advantages of this achievement.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support fast development of new technologies that has advantages for people's living. Firstly, the new achievements have enhanced the safety and security in many of fields. For example, in medicine, these advances increased safety and accuracy in medical devices and appliances that help to cure the diseases better than before.
In addition, the rapid development of new technologies in recent years, such as computer systems and internet professions, has increased the speed of data processing and has decreased its costs. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers shows that calculations and data processing became faster and cheaper after the advent of computer
In conclusion, while there are several compelling debates on effects of recent technologies for societies, my personal sentiment is that the benefits of this rapid development are far outweighed its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 202.0 242.827586207 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43069306931 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98056393925 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589108910891 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.5514759079 50.4703680194 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.125 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.625 7.25397266985 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250549325955 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112287546954 0.0925447433944 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662090463796 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146009446414 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657791182181 0.0609392437508 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 12.6369458128 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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